Malo bula and Hi my name is Apii.I am a students at Owairaka school.Me and my class has been writeing amzing story.One of my story topic is The Year 2050.It is about to Awesome kids going to the Future hope you like it.
Hi Apii, Its Washington from room 8, Your writing is really interesting to read, maybe next time add what they needed to build the time machine and the materials in it.
Thank you Wash for your Comment I'll make sure that I will add your infomation Thank you so mush I haven't had a comment for a long time Blog you laters.Apii
Hi Apii I'm Elio from room 25 and I like your writing a lot because you put a lot of punctuation. Next time you should check the spelling of the words you wrote because some of them are spelt the wrong way. You should also try drawing a picture then put it near your writing. Blog ya later. Elio
Hi Apii, Its Washington from room 8,
ReplyDeleteYour writing is really interesting to read, maybe next time add what they needed to build the time machine and the materials in it.
BLog Ya Later! ;)
Thank you Wash for your Comment I'll make sure that I will add your infomation Thank you so mush I haven't had a comment for a long time Blog you laters.Apii
ReplyDeleteHi Apii I'm Elio from room 25 and I like your writing a lot because you put a lot of punctuation. Next time you should check the spelling of the words you wrote because some of them are spelt the wrong way. You should also try drawing a picture then put it near your writing.
ReplyDeleteBlog ya later. Elio